Drifting, 4

December 17, 2008

alapaap

 

tumama ang sikat

ng palubog na araw

sa aking kamay at

sa basong plastik;

kumislap ang baso,

habang tila natubog

sa gintong makinang

ang aking kamay;

nabaling ang tingin

sa balumbon ng ulap

na tila bulak sa ilalim

ng aking sinasakyan;

at sa pagtama ng kisap

sa aking mga mata,

naisip ko kung maari

bang ipahid sa mga ulap

 

itong aking mga luha?

 

ang air space sa pagitan ng vietnam at cambodia

copyright Michael P. De Guzman

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Previous Comments

natagtag ako — wow — ala ako masabi…
so well written — and the ‘build up’ is so subtle — with the one liner at the end that made it all more blagggg…. thanks mike for creating such great poetry…

Posted by derick at December 18, 2008, 12:39 am

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Your passion for poetry is palpable. I love every word.

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Ruthy:

phrases and terms that delight the senses. i love the choice of poems. ^^

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I’m just passing by, Come and Visit Angeles City, lets exchange link if was possible and I gave back the favor, thank you and have a nice day!

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